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Flower's Whimsy

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Description

Character belongs to :iconthenightwishmaster:
Reference used is by :icondanika-stock:
Image size
2448x3264px 2.13 MB
Make
SAMSUNG
Model
SPH-L710
Shutter Speed
1/15 second
Aperture
F/2.6
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Aug 20, 2015, 10:04:03 PM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Hi,
good work, especially skirt and face are very beauty.
There aren't big mistakes:
- right foot is too little, if you want use prospective it must be more back respect other foot
- junction between shoulder and right arm is strange, line is discontinuos. You could move shoulder a bit (or arm.. how you prefer)
- with raised arm breast must be a litte up respect other
- fingers (pinkie and annular) seem too ling respect others... maybe 'cause the palm line that started by pinkie is not soft. Try to make it a bit curve.
Petals, hairs and jersey are very good <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
Hope you forget my English not very good.